[edit: Thank you to everyone who showed interest! You all should have received a note from me -- please reply to it as soon as possible.
]For those who don't know, I have been working on an original online manga,
Wings of Wishes, for the past four years or so. Because of my school schedule, I never managed to get far into the story, even after restarting it once. And as my current readers know, I've been on hiatus for nearly a year now. Basically, this is the problem:

Each page takes too long for me to draw.

I'm unhappy with the plot in general, and I often discover plot holes that I can't seem to fix.

My tastes, my art style, and the things I want to express in a story have changed a lot since I was fourteen years old.
So, even though I'm afraid this might upset many people, I want to
restart again, this time with a completely different storyline, set in an alternate universe, but with the
same cast of characters, more or less. (I already have a couple pages, ~2500 words, written on this tentative new version, including the script for the first two chapters.)
I'm going to work on a style of drawing pages that will let me draw QUICKLY without compromising too much quality. Also, I want to have the majority of the story written out BEFORE I start drawing anything.
This is where I'd like some help.
I'd like
beta readers who can do these things for me:

Allow me to bounce ideas off of you. Critique, comment, and share some of your creativity with me.

Be interested in the project. If you don't like my drawing style or shoujo manga, you probably shouldn't bother.

Read over my script (if you'd like) and character profiles, and make sure I stay consistent with actions, speech, and personalities.

And of course, nag at me when I slack off and don't update enough. (this is optional too.)
I know this has been a long message, so I thank anyone who read all of it.
IF YOU ARE AT ALL INTERESTED IN BECOMING A BETA READER, PLEASE COMMENT OR NOTE ME. Thank you so very much. <3
And thank you also to all those who have been so patient with this project. I want to make it better for you guys, especially.
Devious Comments
(I also grammar/spell check well)
Lise
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je ne sais pas...
It's sort of sad that it's going to be restarted with a different storyline but it's your story and you probably know what's best ^^~
Awesomeness :0~!
If you're starting over with a completely new story, you could always keep the old one up as an 'extra' - "Before there was WoW there was ..."
Bonne chance!
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~chainedblunt is made of love and rainbows.
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~chainedblunt is made of love and rainbows.
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He broke my heart, but then I broke his PSP, and guess who cried harder?
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<3
I would personally liked to have seen what would have happened if you kept the same storyline, but obviously it's your decision and like some people said - we have no right to complain. XDD I'm looking forward to the new version, and I'd just like to say: good luck!
I wish you lots of luck on the re-start!
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You stupidity annoys me. -_-;
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